Feedback

[nunnely]

Shalom, for those who know me, this is a common thing I like to do. For those that don't, I am a big fan of feedback from multiple eyes. I want to be able to grow as much as a writer as I can. Explains part of the reason why I went from Jason Dave to Dominic Nunnely. I just wanted to get some overall feedback on the character of Dominic Nunnely and what I have for RPs so far. I love to hear people's opinions so I can grow from them and hopefully be better. 


iconicprowrestling.proboards.com/thread/486/17 ALONE PART I
iconicprowrestling.proboards.com/thread/531/ii ALONE PART II
iconicprowrestling.proboards.com/thread/590/iii ALONE PART III
iconicprowrestling.proboards.com/thread/658/iv ALONE PART IV

Let me know what you think of the character, one of the RPs listed above, or just my writing overall. Tips, advice, dislikes, likes, etc. I don't mind criticism or praise. I'll take any form of feedback. 

[Eliza Dresden]

All your links--at least for mobile--keep loading this post and not your RPs, for some reason?

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Apr 10, 2019 16:58:45 GMT -8 Eliza Dresden said:

All your links--at least for mobile--keep loading this post and not your RPs, for some reason?

Same for Desktop

[Brooklyn Holloway]

I just checked your post in "edit" and there are no links to those rps

[nunnely]

Apr 10, 2019 16:58:45 GMT -8 Eliza Dresden said:

All your links--at least for mobile--keep loading this post and not your RPs, for some reason?

Apr 10, 2019 17:07:21 GMT -8 @willowrainn said:

Apr 10, 2019 16:58:45 GMT -8 Eliza Dresden said:

All your links--at least for mobile--keep loading this post and not your RPs, for some reason?

Same for Desktop

Apr 10, 2019 17:25:54 GMT -8 Brooklyn Holloway said:

I just checked your post in "edit" and there are no links to those rps

Yeah, I'm kind of a dumbass and didn't double check to make sure it worked. So I fixed it. Thank you for telling me.